12 - Tempting Offer
- Keigane
- Sep 30, 2024
- 2 min read
Updated: Sep 21









Back in the present time, this chapter concludes the first meeting of Keith and Gab. Keith doesn't believe anything Gab says yet, and tries to explain everything in a rational way, while Gab is highly amused by this. Is this the beginning of a heart-warming relationship?... š«¶š»
So it's finally done... It's sad that I needed so many months for only a few pages. I didn't draw a single page in July and August, and only started again in the end of September. I drew half of the chapter within 3 days now. Just because I finally want to go on. Btw I didn't rush the plot, I just drew faster and maybe less accurately. ^^" The plot has been finished for a long time already, so I just have to get through the points.
I hope someone will still read this despite the long break. And I also hope I'll finally be able to draw it more regularly again. Any support is highly appreciated, I'd be very grateful for signs of interest. š¤ If you want to continue reading, please let me know by hitting the Like-button (or comment). š«¶š» If this chapter reaches 5 likes and 2 comments, it'll be continued. Sorry for doing this, but I need to set a minimum amount of interest so sharing this story is worth the effort.
And, please, even if this may lead to accusations, no more critiques. I'm really fed up with them. I can't and won't change anything about this story anymore. Remember that this is the 4th time I'm drawing this story, and it already contains a major amount of changes compared to the older versions, plus there's ofc more changes planned for the future. I considered loads of critiques while doing these changes already, and I have to draw the line at some point. I can only hope it's finally good enough to have a right to exist as an online manga for free. š¤·š»āāļø




PS I read a great quote recently, and I can't find it now, of course, but it was basically about how some criticism is just that, and not a necessary correction, so not everything has to be implemented.Ā
You know your story best, and you know what is best for it!Ā
Stay strong! š„ā„
Keith's expression is just so heart-wrenching on the first page! You are truly incredible with conveying emotion!Ā šā„
Well, if Gab wasn't beating around the bush in the previous chapter already...! I love their interactions and the mystery. I wonder how could Gab truly help Keith.
Guest Dec 11, 2024
Keith not believing in things he can't explain is hilarious and cute at the same time, great chapter
Guest Oct 21, 2024
This is really good :)
Guest Oct 09, 2024
It's getting exciting, now that Gab is on the stage and showed a bit of his powers! I can't even blame Keith for being confused even tho he's drunk. I would be the same lol
Can't wait to read and know more about them after their first meetingš¤
Beesting