18 - Silent Doubt
- Keigane
- Oct 19
- 1 min read
Updated: Nov 2
Gab reappears, seeking to dispel his boredom. Meanwhile, Keith embarks on what may be the hardest journey of his life.
This chapter was a very intense journey for myself, too. It's been a long time since I felt my own characters and story so intensely. I really hope it's noticeable. I added the full letter at the chapter's end as a small addition.
Do you think Keith will stay true to his reslove? I'd be super grateful if you share your thoughts on this chapter with me. 🖤
I had a feeling that Gab was haunting Keith as Kaz’s spirit… And I thought it well. It was fascinating to get a glimpse into his perspective and his life — to see that he, too, has his own assignments, even if over his long life he’s developed some unique "games" to drive away boredom. Keith’s ritual at Kaz’s grave was simply heartbreaking — the lines, the memories, and all the illustrations. I could truly feel his pain, and a kind of relief by telling him the truth. Hats off! I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
So Gab haunts Keith with the ghost of his lover... I love the panels with Raphael - and the way you draw Gab - plot unfolds further too! The Keith panels are heart wrecking! I want to embrace him and soothe him - he is in pieces. The letter is beautifully sad. "You are the one" - was so moving, so... intense, in just few words. Hit me hard.