3 - Strain
- Keigane
- Aug 1, 2023
- 1 min read
Updated: Sep 21
So Keiths problems are related to a former drug addiction which - of course - makes his job very difficult. But he manages to pull himself together because of Jurjis' pressure. The event that caused his addiction will be revealed soon - in the case there's readers who still know the previous version of the story, you already know what it is. I changed the chronology of events in this version. There's one bigger change which is the main reason for my restart, too, you'll see that in the next chapters.
The art of this chapter is still almost entirely the same as in the old version, except for the backgrounds which I exchanged for the 3d models.
Guest Aug 08, 2024
So interesting, I hope you don't get unmotivated and keep uploading, I don't speak german unfortunately, so if you change the language I won't be able to understand.<3
Guest Aug 08, 2024
I just started your story, and I really like it! I want to know more about Keith and his past :)
Guest Aug 08, 2024
Die neuen Hintergründe sehen toll aus und helfen echt dabei, sich die Szenen auch räumlich und in Bewegung vorstellen zu können ^.^ Ich habe gemerkt, dass die Reihenfolge gewisser Events anders ist und ich finds gut so. Man kann den Plot bis jetzt sehr gut folgen, gleichzeitig werden gewisse Hintergrunddetails über Keiths Vergangenheit und Persönlichkeit erst später und langsam offenbart (und nicht gleich auf einmal) - für Neulinge deiner Welt und Charaktere ist das mitunter besser, weil man mehr Zeit hat Keiths Charakter kennenzulernen und es ist auch spannender.