16 - Missed Opportunity
- Keigane
- Aug 1
- 1 min read
Updated: Oct 2
Keith finds out the truth about what happened to Kaz after the attack, guided by Gab.
The cemetery background pics are altered photos taken by me in Necropolis Glasgow. Later I used a 3D background from CSP, too. I've put more work into this chapter than I intended, and tbh for some personal reasons, this one hit me very hard emotionally.
I hope you can see now that Kaz' ghost doesn't exist, it's always been Gab.
I was about to discontinue this story mid-chapter, but then I finished in the end. Tbh, I’ll never understand why people who consider my characters bothersome and dislike them in general, still follow me on IG and even try to tell me to draw other characters. Please don’t do that. I regret that I allowed ppl to hurt me so much that I almost gave up on my most important art project.
Since I've rebuilt this homepage, I pasted the comments here, but without my answers in chapter 1 - 15 (I didn't save them).
Wow! This chapter is one of my favorites so far. It’s filled with intense, heavy emotions that are so easy to feel through, and the drawings capture the oppressive, suffocating atmosphere in an incredible way—along with Keith’s pain, guilt, and grief. Kaz’s spirit and words only intensify these feelings, striking blow after blow at Keith... I’m at a loss for words, you have all my admiration!
Lorian August 09, 2025
A beautifully tragic chapter. The essence of his grief and guilt, it's all here, forming the ghost of his lover. And the art is stunning too, fitting well for depth of the story. I know how you feel, about lack of engagement... I feel same. But you do wonderful work, and I am thrilled for everything you post. The intensity of this chapter moved me deeply.