8 - Out of Control
- Keigane
- Jan 1, 2024
- 1 min read
Updated: Sep 21
The reason for Keiths broken heart, Kaz, appears! D: Included a fangirl. Keith doesn't really want to be jealous because he doesn't want to take the affair with Kaz too seriously, but well...
I bought Clip Studio Paint now, so my style might change a bit from here on. I'll have to practice with this, but I definitely wanna take advantage of Clip Studio's 3D models and also hope that I can edit my 3D backgrounds better now.
Some things about the previous version, you don't have to read them if you don't know it:
Here's another important change: Keith took drugs occasionally now, too. He didn't do that in the old version. The original plan (from the novel I once wrote) was that he took drugs in his teens, but stopped when he started working for Jurji. BUT!! This isn't very reasonable after all - in the novel the plot was different and it was suitable, but it isn't for the manga now. So he takes coke occasionally now. "Just for fun" as he thinks, but of course this won't go well. He's making a very common mistake here. He thinks he has control, it's all just fun, but in the end it isn't.
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ich stimme den vorigen Kommentar zu - durch die Neuorganisation des Plots und die Platzierung der Rückblende als Erinnerung weit nach dem Prolog ist die Vorgeschichte Keiths und von Kaz jetzt deutlich ausführlicher, logischer und einfacher zu verstehen. Es macht jetzt deutlich mehr Sinn, dass Keith sich für Kaz' Situation schuldig fühlt und die Änderung, dass er schon während der Beziehung zu ihm drogensüchtig war, erklärt auch Keiths Rückfall besser. Für komplette Neueinsteiger, die die Vorgeschichte der Charaktere überhaupt nicht kennen, ist es jetzt auch sicher spannender herauszufinden, was genau vorgefallen ist zwischen den beiden. Denn es gibt zwar immer Andeutungen dazu, aber die sind schön subtil ^^ Dadurch steigt dann auch die Spannung bis zur Auflösung des "Warums".…
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I love it so much!!! 🖤
With the new version everything feels even more close and detailed. You can catch the emotions and vibe even more and the scenes are longer which I appreciate lots!!! I love this scene!! Following Keith's mind during this is so interesting and the changes seem very realistic to me! Fits to Keith I'd say! Have to say it again, love it! 🖤🖤🖤 Always cool to see Keith's Tattoos, I hope there will be a chance that Kaz's Tattoo will be shown too! Looking forward to the next chapter!! 🖤